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Inhuman Script-Story
by Dying Dutchman, 2011

Cast
T:Taylor Conagher: nikitak/hekshanian-halfblood,male, pilot/captain of the freighter”valkyrie”, 28years old, 4 arms, white fur
G: Gavin “Cyclops”: (no familyname known), fullblood morback, soldier,male , has a revolver and a combatknife,23 years old, hates insults to himself or anyone else he cares for, wears a bandanna over the place where his right eye should be , his right ear is ripped to shreds, right hand has short claws while his left one has long claws
R:Rogax”Jax”Zephyr: 3/4 southerner hekshanian,1/4northerner hekshanian,male, radio operator, 20 years old, smokes a lot, he has blue hair(partial northern blood), has markings over his left eye
J:Jimmy”Jimmylegs” (no family name known), full blood chuian,male, orphan, 12 years old


T:Aight we've landed on hekshano
R:and where exactly are we?
T:north tek Spaceport
R:lovely childhood memories, urgh!
T:don't forget we got stuff to do, go get Gavin
R:im on it

…*sleeping Gavin*…

R: ey Cyclops, get outta bed u lazy bum*slaps him on the head*
G:hey wha? Ow it's you, are we there yet
R:yes we've arrived
G:5more minutes okay?*turns around in his bed*
R*flips Gavin's mattress*
G: im so gonna get u for this one day
R:yeah wadever

*both leave the sleeping area and go to see taylor*

T: ah finally, alright I want both of you to go get me a mechanic, a good one, the gravity ring is going to hell and the second sail is dead
T:is that it, theres like a million mechs just out the door and…
T:one that doesn't ask questions, know what I mean, we don't want any rulerists to know were here don't we
R:if u put it that way ok
G: so a non-spaceport mechanic that is
T: yup
G: why do you always want things to go the hard way, can't we just get a mech here, let him to the job, then cut his throat and hide the body in that ship next to us, easy as hell
T:I sure hope ur joking right
R:*looks annoyed*no we're not here to kill anyone smartass
G:whaaaat, I was just giving suggestions
T:bad suggestion that is
G:sheesh im just jokin' man
T:u got 3days to find me a mech that's on our side
G:or else what/T:just get that mechanic, damurai, north tek, whereverelse u might find one, please its vital!

*Jax and Gavin both leave the ship, and jax almost immediately after leaving the ship lits a cigarette*

G: hey let's go get a drink first, we've been in space for too long, cmon man 3 days is quite some time
R:fine*starts looking at the ground*
G:hey sup man haven't seen u so depressed in a while
R: my parent died here in the massacres, ive told ya before, and now that im back here I feel like it…*minitear* it's happening again
G: ah I feel sorry for ya, my parents are dead as well, both, sherish the memory while ya still can
R:let's just go get that drink,ok
G:well that's more like the Jax I used to know

*after some walking they get to a bar and enter*

*Gavin puts himself on an empty chair near the bar next to a chuian kid*

*Rogax stand idle for a couple of moments, and them positions himself strategically next to a light brown furred hekshanian*

*kid chu tries to order something to drink but the barmaid ignores him*

Gavin:*helpful and blunt as he is* oy barmaid, could you get me a beer plz*barmaid stares at his shredded ear for half a second and decides to give him his drink*
G:and give that little guy here a drink on me, whatcha drinkin' pal
chuian kid:*a bit scared* j..juice please

*barmaid gets him the juice after watching at gavins shredded ear again*

G:what's ur name kid
Chu:*still feeling quite scared* Jimmy, mister
G:hey don't be scared, I won't bite ya

*jimmy smiles*

G: name's Gavin, u can call me Gav or Cyclops if ya want to
J: Cy.cyclops?
G*points to his right"eye"*
J: oww that's why, you were a soldier weren't you
G:what makes u think I "was"in the army, im still serving ya know
J:wooow*stares with big eyes at Gavin's revolver*
G:and no im not going to shoot anyone
J: mister Gavin, why are your nails so long?
G: *looks at left hand*by morback standards this is normal
J: but then why are those of your right hand so short
G:utility reasons, you know to get my gun out without cutting myself, or my knife
J:can I see it
G:wha.?
J: ur knife
G: ow, yeah sure here ya go*pulls knife out of the sheat and hands it to jimmy*
J: *surprised that Gavin actually let him hold it* wow it's heavy
G: hah for you it is maybe

*Jimmy hands the knife back, Gavin puts it away in the sheat*

G: so were'r ur parents, I imagine they must be worried where u are
J:*looksdown* …dead
G: that's sad to hear *notices Jax's kissin' the light brown furred hekshanian girl , then he turns his head back to jimmy*
J:he a friend of yours?
G: yup he's our radioman
J : looks like he's quite used to hekshanians
G: duh he's one himself, haven't you noticed thatJ: now that u mention it yes
G: ow right Jimmy u happen to know a good mechani…*notices that Jax is getting' in trouble with a slightly bigger male dark brown furred hekshanian with black stripes* hold on Jim,stay behind me, Jax needs my help

*darkbrown hekshan punches Jax in the face, jax falls down*

*jimmy to Gavin*:watch out for that guy he works for Lindor*jax gets back up his feet but keeps his distance to his opponent
G:i don't care who he works for he aint punching my Jax and gets away with it!

*Gavin goes to stand in between Jax and the darker male, with his back to Jax*

darker hekshanian:get out of my way u bloody morback scum
R*to the darker dude*: if ya know whats good for ya u better back off
G: I aint gettin' out of anyones way, if u wanna ge to him u first gonna need to get trough me
*jimmy is getting scared and hides after Rogax' leg*

*the dark hekshanian launches a punch in Gavin's direction and Gavin gets hit in the face but remains on his legs*

G: alright that's it now ur gonna get some

*gavin delivers a very fast but hard punch in the middle of the heks' chest,the hekshanian flinches,gavin then whacks his head on his opponents head, the hekshanian falls down and stays down, the companions of that guy take a last look at gavin before they pick their friend up and leave*

R: ey y'allright buddy
G:yeah
J: Wow that was awesome, but why didn't you knife him or shoot him, or bite him(morbacks have quite a nice and deadly set of biters ya know)
G: cuz that guy was probably drunk and I don't kill for fun ya know
J:it was still awesome, and you didn't evenyou're your knife out
G:was there any need for that knife, i was just protectin' ma buddy here
R: well yeah but I think we better get moving, people are staring at ya
G:meh yur right, let's get outta here

*all three of em leave the bar and go back in the direction of the spaceport*

*back in the spaceport in the "valkyrie"*

T: *slightly sarcastic*back so soon boys
R: yeah I had some problems, luckily Gav was there to save the day again
G:forget about it will ya it was nothin'
T:i let you out to find me a mechanic and u get in barfights come on!, and what's the deal with the kid!
J:wow he is big
T:yeah I know that
J:u have four arms mister
T:yeah I know that as well
J:ur so soft*gives taylor a hug*
J: my name's jimmy
T:hello…Jimmy, im Taylor
J:is this ship yours
T:actually it's a freighter,and yeah it is mine
J:mister Taylor can I stay here
T:do your parents know you're here?
G: erm boss, the kid's an orphan
T:ow; ah hell why not get him a bed
G:kay*Gavin leaves to get a mattress*
J:thanks mister*^^*

*Gavin returns with a spare mattress*

G: come here kid follow me*they go to the sleeping area of the ship and enter gavins cabin*
G:here ya go*puts mattress on the ground and throws a blanket at Jimmy*
J:thanks mister Gavin
G: just Gavin is fine
J:OK
G: ya better get some sleep, tomorrow we need to get a mechanic to get some repairs done
J: I know a good one, she looked after me for a while
G oh really, where can we find him
J: it's a she, she lives in Damurai, not that far away
G: awesome, now off to bed with you, I need some sleep as well *takes off shirt and metal plated boots and goes to bed, leaves his pants and bandanna on*
J: how'd you lose your eye and ear actually
G: I'll tell ya tomorrow ok, now I need some sleep
J: happy dreams Gavin
G:goodnight

*both fall asleep*

All writing, characters, webdesign and artwork are (c) H. Carlian 1997-2012
Fan works are (c) their respective authors, creators and artists.
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